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dear someone,

there are no funerals
for the flesh

no hospitals
for the mind

no curtains & no cremations
for all our pretty words

paradigm,
you can't save every patient

sweet,
a corpse would warm your bed
love poem for no one. 

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Bleh, I need to stop writing this emotional shit. :XD:
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student Writer
i came back to this poem again
very truthful
except according to your title, either i'm not dead, or i don't write poetry.
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insomniaplague Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD I think I'm in the same boat! I'm pretty sure you're alive, though. :p Or, at least have a very well-trained ghost body. 
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Writer
lol
maybe the last one yes
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
Girls who write poetry never die in a sense because their words live on in people. ;)
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insomniaplague Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well, we should hope! :) 
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
:D
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Desiree407 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's beautiful.
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insomniaplague Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The work starts off quite nice but in the 'end' perhaps it sort of drifts. I mean the start is a very nice expression - thought if one thinks too hard, it turns confusing - till "all our pretty worlds" it goes well but the next... well it did register but it didn't sound like an ending. That said, it is emotional and so I guess I am fine with it coming this way :)
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insomniaplague Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sssshhh, don't tell anyone I wasn't trying! D: 

Okay, sorry, this is just a rather lazy poem. XD Thank you for the critique! This was one of the many poems I made that I never had an "ending" too, so I just tacked something on. Hence, it sounds a little bumpy. I'll see what I can do, and make sure I smooth it out in the future. :) 
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